An old house, a geek, a cute transvestite, a very tall lesbian, and at least one ghost–what could happen? – Adult situations and artistic nudity. Not suitable for children.
You should change this line to:
“I think someone’s been sleeping in my van.”
Phrased in the past tense that way, it allows that the person might not still be there (but doesn’t exclude the possibility).
Phrased in the present tense, means someone is currently sleeping in the van, so Carly’s question doesn’t make sense.
You should change this line to:
“I think someone’s been sleeping in my van.”
Phrased in the past tense that way, it allows that the person might not still be there (but doesn’t exclude the possibility).
Phrased in the present tense, means someone is currently sleeping in the van, so Carly’s question doesn’t make sense.