Parting Space
Sep12
on 2018-09-12
at 22:05
Chapter: (A)Wash
Characters: Ace, Akane Ryoshi, Denali, Gina "Mama" Gibs, Jaz, Luna, Magenta, na-Nilina, Rusty, Sky, Steward Ashe, Surety, Veracity, Walton, Wildstar
Location: OIS Gene Rodenberry
I think I’ve spent more than a week trying to get the dialog right…
I guess nobody offered to dry his back.
Re: “I think I’ve spent more than a week trying to get the dialog right…”
Just as well to say nothing, then …
… sometimes, “Less-Is-More”, & all that “Stuff-Like-That-There” …
🙂
Yes, agrecian here
Unfortunately, you either need a different background to the title, or a different font. Because on first glance, it looks like “Farting Space”
Maybe that’s why Ace is leaving 😛
Another wall of textless?
[al mar]:
But th’wall’s NOT textless, really …
… it clearly says: “SENTO”.
😛
Long johns and cargo shorts? Science fiction needs to be science now.
Nanomachine full-body ship-suit, exactly like the crew is wearing, aside from colourations… plus some extra cargo shorts because Ace doesn’t feel like letting the ENTIRE crew start speculating about size. 😉
…But more to the point, the Shipsuit only bares his arms and legs because he deliberately made gestures to retract those parts. Seems it reset to default after recovering him post-bathing.
(Sounds better than: “Andy forgot to bare the legs and sleeves, doesn’t it? ^_^)
The first thing the girls are going to do then the door closes… talk about Ace behind his back.
I think that’s the subtle joke of this page, yes.
Ace: ‘Why is no one else getting out… Oh wait, I know exactly why… (sigh).’