Aelfheim
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Boy meets dark elf.
Hans Madison is getting ready to graduate High School and head for college the next year. But he falls through a circle of lightning to another world. Now he’s had to fight for his life against a wolfman, fallen in love with a badly scarred dark elf, fending off the the advances of an amorous queen, and gotten embroiled in an 800 year old war. And that’s just his first day on Aelfheim.
This is something I originally composed back in 2002. I’m sure you can tell that it’s heavily influenced by the alternate world genre of manga and anime.
It’s something of a freshman effort, and I’m in the process of cleaning it up and posting it here. But I hope you’ll enjoy it.
CHAPTER 1–NAIVETY – A boy’s shocking personality.
CHAPTER 2–CONFUSION – Boy meets werewolf.
CHAPTER 3–FEAR – Boy faces wurm.
CHAPTER 4–COMPASSION – Boy meets dark elf.
CHAPTER 5–PASSION – Breakfast in a cave.
CHAPTER 6–EFFORT – Dark elf loses boy.
CHAPTER 7–DEFIANCE – Elves and more elves.
CHAPTER 8–RELAXATION – Sparring and a bath.
CHAPTER 9–DECEIT – Elf vs. elf.
CHAPTER 10–DISTRACTION – A disturbance at the dinner table.
CHAPTER 11–CONVERSATION – Just guy talk.
CHAPTER 12–DREAM – A little dream…
CHAPTER 13–FUGUE – Wake-up call.
CHAPTER 14–BATTLE – The first taste is free.
CHAPTER 15–AFTERMATH – Call iy a win. Maybe.
CHAPTER 16–SOLACE – A secret or two…
CHAPTER 17–RESURGENCE – Yet another bath.
CHAPTER 18–REVELATION – “Tin roof! Rusted!
CHAPTER 19–REFRESHMENT – No bacon?!
CHAPTER 20–DISCLOSURE – Believe or not, here if comes.
CHAPTER 21–DEPARTURE – But you just got here…
CHAPTER 22–MEMORY – Unforgettable.
CHAPTER 23–REVISION
CHAPTER 24–AWAKENING
CHAPTER 25–REALIZATION
CHAPTER 26–DOWNFALL
CHAPTER 27–RAGNAROK
CHAPTER 28–DISASTER
CHAPTER 29–RAGE
CHAPTER 30–FURY
CHAPTER 31–RESOLUTION
CHAPTER 32–CONFESSION
CHAPTER 33–INTENT
CHAPTER 34–-DETERMINATION
CHAPTER 35–ANGUISH
CHAPTER 36–CLOSURE
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Sounds like a great side-project
As an amateur proof-reader, only one thing ‘jumps out’ at me: feel like “Few sure” should maybe be “Fer sure”, to keep with the ‘surfer dude’ vibe
I don’t know about it being “a freshman effort” it’s actually very good.
The link on page 17 to page 18 hasnt been placed. FYI 🙂
Fixed